Tristan Williams-Page 23 Analyze this message

I would have my boss to change the little saying like “punch” and “ASAP” in the e-mail because they may not know what those sayings mean. I would have my boss change the last sentence when he is telling the employers that he will do his level best to sell America. I would instead say,” I hope that you enjoy your time here in America and that you have a wonderful experience in the nation that I love so much.” I would not consider this message to be audience centered because some of the slang in the e-mail the audience wouldn’t understand due to their culture barrier.